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Siobhan's Feedback:

Strengths:

• Clear text with good fonts
• Main stories are highlighted and easy to see
• Consist theme
• Great picture

Areas for Improvement:

Not much to improve in my opinion, maybe just a little less text in the column on the right or change the font/colour of the main cover lines to make them stand out even more.

Other Comments:

Just a great contents page, well done!

Vicky Harman - Feedback
Strengths: The contents title and the titles in red with black background look so good! The page numbers also look really good and clear. The models makeup and outfit looks really well thoughtout and works with the theme of the page. And the colour scheme works really well.
Areas to improve: Can't really think of anything, you could just make the gaps between the articles descriptions abit bigger so its more clear.
Other comments: It just looks really good and works really well, love the titles.

Strengths: I like the way your main bits of text are off centred and not straight. It makes them stand out more.  The page numbers are clear and the bigger white writing is. The models costume and make up fit well with the theme of the contents page.
Areas to improve: I think it would look better if the image you've used was bigger. And the smaller white writing would look better if it was bigger as it would make it easier to read and leave a bigger gap between each atricle so its clear where one stops and where one starts
Commets - it looks really professional and you've clearly spent a lot of time doing it.